REWRITING THE NARRATIVE BREAKDOWN

 Rewriting the Narrative Breakdown. 

As our idea had changed so much and the times the actors would be available were not yet confirmed, I made a bullet point list of 40 shot ideas that would act as a safety net for us on the shoot day should we not have enough to film. This acted as our new, brief narrative breakdown as we could still use the previous one. 

SHOT IDEAS.

→ spinning ring on the table

→ lower half of face licking finger 

→ flipping the page 

→ “birdseye” shot of the map TRIPOD WOULD NEED TO BE HIGH 

→ circling on the map 

→ dragging tools in the skulls eye sockets  

→ pulling woman's eye open, shining light into them

→ mascara streaking down cheek 

→ slicing berries 

→ crushing berries

→ extracting juice with pipette 

→ holding berries up the light of the window 

→ pouring ricin into the beaker, same level to the beaker 

→ dropping the juice into the beaker with the pipette 

→ fizzing funnel 

→ panning across the cork board 

→ extreme close up of children's drawings 

→ extreme close up of painting dolls face, mascara streaking down its face

(black)

→ playing with her face 

→ pov shot from the storage cupboard of the man through the gap in the door

as it is slightly ajar 

→ writing the same phrase over and over in the page of a book (eyes are the

window of the soul)

→ floor shot of her feet tied to the chair, light spilling into the room

→ him pouring the liquid into the funnel 

→ Transition; his silhouette walks past the camera and the next shot is the light

being switched on in the storage cupboard

→ blood dripping on a page 

→ pinning up bloody plasters 

→ pulling open the duct tape 

→ putting on the gloves with the latex sound

→ extreme close up of the doll

→ Plucking the berries off of the stem 

→ extreme close up of the sharp tools 

→ swirling the beaker 

→ close up putting glasses down on the desk

→ dead flowers

→ close up of jars 

→ shot from outside of the room 

→ the mannequin 

→ panning of maps 

→ opening drawers 

→ playing with the sharp edges of his tools

→ vinyl spinning

→ him interacting with the vinyl