DEVELOPING OUR IDEA (2)

Main idea.

After presenting our ideas to Luke, the creative director at Hurtwood, and Mike, we as a group discussed the feedback given and adjusted the aspects to our concept accordingly. 

The feedback given, noted on my laptop during our presentation was:

• Who is the man? What are his intentions, and why is he doing this?
• Who is the woman? Why is he her victim?
• Consider different methods of poisoning other than a tea cup to maintain a serious tone throughout.
• Think of possible shooting locations.

In response to this, my group and I decided on the details. 

The man is the son of his wealthy father who has recently passed, and is murdering his sister in an attempt of gaining her share of his will. This is his first time murdering someone, so he is extremely precise and intricate as he has researched methods beforehand due to his neurotic personality. In the plot, this killing is what triggers his realisation of the fact that he thoroughly enjoys inflicting pain on others, and turns him into a serial killer. 

In regard to the way he poisons her, we are ridding of the tea cup idea, and instead will use a liquid of a combination of berries and chemicals (the specifics have yet to be researched), and will be fed to her through a funnel duct taped to her mouth. 

As a possible shooting location, Luke suggested the Beatrice Webb garden house as it has the appearance of a greenhouse, allowing us extra shots to play with lighting, as well as the plants. We still are considering the Hurtwood boarding lounge for the living room setting due to its antique interior, but if that isn't an option then the Beatrice Webb lounge could be an alternative.

Besides that, none of the other details of our sequence have been changed so far.